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The truth is
I always watch those romance movies
expecting to be that beautiful girl he sees in a cafe
that he can't stop thinking about.

The truth is
I've had songs and songs written with my name
that he sang to my window
chocked full of 'forever is in my eyes.'

The truth is
I've been that girl that he held hands with
in the grocery store, that tumbled after him
in fields, that stroked his hair in the hospital.


The truth is
he and I were like a movie
even when he yelled and lost his temper
even when I got insecure and couldn't take it
even when he lied and made me leave him.


except the part where he didn't chase after me
and I didn't cry the day after.



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I wrote this damn poem cause I'm sick of watching these unrealistically perfect meet ups between two amazingly perfect people in movies.



Sorry for being a debbie downer. XD I'm just struggling with believing in love at the moment.


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:icon7dayles:
7Dayles Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
I love the emotion you infuse your writing with. It's an art. :)
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raemarshall Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Professional Photographer
I appreciate you taking the time to read some of my poems, it means a lot.
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:icon7dayles:
7Dayles Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
My pleasure.
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morningstarskid Featured By Owner May 9, 2010  Professional Artist
When you finally set your-self free...then you will be SEEN as you are...said it before and listen to the music of the words now...whoever lost you...has really lost
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Hottwheeles4agirl Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010
I absolutely LOVE this.
And just remember the good memories. You had them for a reason:)
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raemarshall Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010  Professional Photographer
that's true at least :heart:
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cutofakiss Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
the truth is i am in love with your writings and can relate to every single one way too much.
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raemarshall Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010  Professional Photographer
Ah thank you babe I appreciate it
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NovaSamm Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Strangely enuf...

that's close to how i was with my ex

except for the not crying part.

i'm still crying about it and heartbroken even though it's been like 4 months.
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raemarshall Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2010  Professional Photographer
Aw. I hope you can start to regain the happiness in your life without him. It's so hard to live on your own after being with someone for so long, but it can really heal to do things for yourself and have hope for the future.
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